學生用50分鐘寫了8個事件,你覺得快嗎?理想值應該是30分鐘寫出8~12個事件,因此我覺得有點古怪,但不明白學生卡住的原因,經過一再細問,原來啊初期事件寫不多的原因,往往是卡在細節想不出來,所以停擺。也就是說,創作者無法製造細節過程因而停下,見下面我製造的卡住版舉例。
事件1 『卡住版』舉例
主角收到指令,要去銀行暗殺一位金融主管。
很多學生表示在想事件的時候,無法製造細節,然後就在進入事件2前面卡住了,老師建議沒細節沒關係,你要先製造『情節』,來把事件寫出來,我們來看下面的例子。
事件1 先製造『情節』舉例
主角收到指令,要去銀行暗殺一位金融主管,她運用了能力(能力不明待想)並預計要殺死目標並製造出不在場證明。但因為某個緣故(不明待想)導致無法離開銀行。
上面的紅字部分就是我先製造『情節』的部分,你會發現『細節』我都沒想,整個就是先寫下來再說,是不是很快樂呢!等到後面有靈感的時候,再回頭來補上。接著看下面事件1完成版的例子。
事件1 完成版
主角收到僱傭公司指令要去銀行暗殺一位主管,她運用了碰到生物會變成定時炸彈的能力(類似吉良吉影),並預判了主管的行為模式,預計可以在離開5分鐘銀行後,讓目標爆炸,完成不在場證明。但要離去時剛好遇到一群劫匪搶劫而無法離開銀行,並且被劫匪強迫站在要爆炸的目標旁邊,面臨九死一生的情況。
上面紅字部分,是我有天早上沖澡時突然有的想法(我JOJO粉),才製造出來的細節,雖然不是很厲害,但比起卡住版,已經完成了事件的雛形。另外,紫色字體的部分,是我後來一併增加的,目的是讓主角在一開始的事件1就陷入絕體絕命的狀況,並且把劇情進到事件2。
- 挑戰:在30分鐘,寫出8~12個事件,請務必依照下列步驟挑戰看看。
步驟:
- 先寫出卡住版事件1~12
- 大膽發想,設計『情節』,不管連貫性
- 製造細節,打完收工
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